frozen in the amazement as, I watched the terror before me unfolded ‘ah’ I screamed butterfly flutter in my stomach as my head frod and agony wishing that it was over when I opened my eyes the roller coaster ride was over ‘fuu ’A smiled on my face ‘then I walked away’.
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You wrote really well Lotu! Just remember your punctuation marks of fullstops to make your writing make sense.
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